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I don't know how to feel.

I tried whiskey but
it burned
and I don't want to burn.

I've had enough of that for now.
NaPoWriMo - Day Six.

I wanted to make this longer, but those first lines were the only ones that felt right.
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:iconhannahlily:
hannahlily Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:heart: it!
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Meggie272 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks!
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Dragonia27 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012
Little snippets are still great and they can be just as potent as the longer ones. The first line is something that most people in modern society can relate to; I know I have several times. I really like this one. Thanks for sharing it!
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Meggie272 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh gee, well thank you very much. I'm glad this little one is getting a bit of love. :) (I sound like a parent, haha.)
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Dragonia27 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012
:)It's all good.
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beeinthebottle Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012   Writer
I like those first lines.; I think they say plenty. :) As an aside, I wonder if it's true of others -- my NaPo poems keep getting shorter and shorter.
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Meggie272 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, gosh, thank you!
I think it's that because I have to churn out a poem every day I don't have any huge, long inspired ideas that I can elaborate on, just little snippets of every day thought floating through my head that have to do.
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beeinthebottle Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012   Writer
I don't have long, inspired ideas either. I don't know how many more NaPo days I can write!
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Meggie272 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Keep calm and carry on, I guess...
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beeinthebottle Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012   Writer
I want a t-shirt that says that (they make them).
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