i tilt my head back, and my body floats gracefully upwards, flipping like a log that has been dropped headfirst into a river. i am not in a river, though, the sharp taste of salt in my mouth is unmistakeably sea i can feel my nose burning and salt drying on my cheeks, and my hair floating away in ropey tangled strands that will be hell to brush out when i get home aching and tired i bob like a loose cork, my arms stretched outwards, wrists loose, water ebbing, flowing, skin-pricklingly cold, the seagulls cry and it is like they have lost something but i have found everything, everything i need, this is all that is and this is all that will ever be and the skin on my fingers is tight and wrinkled but if i dried up and died like this would it be so bad? there is a roaring in my ears and my family are somewhere near by with cheap K-mart boogieboards and toddlers with chubby knees poking out from lycra bathing shorts maybe or maybe they are gone now and all that there is in the world is me and the coldness of the ocean and the heat on my upturned face and the sad cry of the seagulls somewhere somewhere above.
The prompt was a sensory poem. Trying to describe a memory and all the feelings and smells and tastes and sounds that went along with it. This happened.
are you sure you weren't in a sensory deprivation chamber?xDgood poem. emotive. strong; the language is so that you needn't have put a description at all.
Thank you! I'm glad you like it.
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